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THE PLACE WHERE ONLY DEAD MEN SLEEP

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Decaying corpses, unique stench
With cordite blowing, past our trench
I no longer hear the warning rattle
But smell and taste impending battle

In the distance sounds a Lewis Gun
Maybe aimed at some unlucky Hun
So far in front of our barbed wire
Amongst the brown serrated mire

The Corporal said this place was ‘Wipers’
Mud and blood and German Snipers
The Sergeant Major called it Ypres
The place where only dead men sleep

My rifle’s clean and my feet are rotten
My bayonet’s sharp and my Wife's forgotten
A para-flare lights up all our sorrow
For us will there be a tomorrow

Will I see again green English grass
Or taste a beer, or see ‘our Lass’
Hear singing birds and cats that howl
A Skylark, Curlew and dogs that growl

Play some cricket, leather on willow
Nice clean bed with a feather pillow
I pray that I will get a chance
To leave this hell of Northern France

The Corporal said this place was ‘Wipers’
Mud and blood and German Snipers
The Sergeant Major called it Ypres
The place where only dead men sleep

(c) Daniel Dwyran

Note: Ypres is a town in Belgium. There were many young men who volunteered and were called up to fight in the Great War to which a great number that served had very limited formal education. Most of them knew they were going to France, or indeed Northern France and as such their topographic awareness was limited between their 'billets' and the trenches.

"Lest we forget"

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<Deleted User> (19913)

Wed 14th Nov 2018 13:22

Wonderful Daniel. I have more contemporary experiences of war and love war poetry and art. Keep it coming.

Big Sal

Sat 6th Oct 2018 04:38

This would fit in perfectly for the articles Keith has been doing on the front page lately.

Great imagery and piece.?

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Mae Foreman

Fri 28th Sep 2018 13:57

Powerful words! Made the hairs stand up on the back of my neck. Just amazing!

Thank you,

Mae

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Grace

Fri 3rd Aug 2018 07:01

This is a treasure. I feel so lucky to have been able to come across your profile ? definitely one of my favorites ! Amazing work.

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Ged the Poet

Tue 3rd Nov 2015 15:19

Glad you are both enjoyed and liked this piece. For those involved in the carnage of trench warfare their daily grind must have been the worlds greatest laxative.

Thank you for your kind comments. 'Lest we Forget'.

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Anna Ghislena

Mon 2nd Nov 2015 09:31

This subject gives writers so much to feel. We are compelled to pen creative lines about these events despite never having been there as witnesses ourselves. The closest I got was on a holiday to northern France two years ago when I took my young children to the fields where the front lines of WW1 would have been and to pay our respects in a cemetery where I was so moved thinking about those young boys beneath our feet, that I wrote a piece too.

I enjoyed the way your poem was written in the first person Daniel, and that it was all from 'your' point of view. I liked "A para-flare lights up all our sorrow" - here I can almost see their faces.

I'll post the poem I wrote after my visit to northern France up here on my blog page when I can find it.

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Patricio LG

Mon 2nd Nov 2015 03:55

Very intuitive, very brave young men that knew suffering beyond most people's comprehension
Good write

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