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MORTAL REMAINS

he held on to his views as tightly

      as a bullet in a breach

hammered them home

      in the compression of a moment

his opinions unleashed

      with deadly aim and

nought but a duel

      could suppress them.

 

I met with him on the bleak moor

      and with luck and aim

blew out his brains

      scattering his thoughts and views

and the world was a better place

       where the wind blew free o'er his mortal remains.

◄ ON THE EDGE

FATHER CHRISTMAS FLIES HIGH ►

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raypool

Fri 4th Dec 2015 10:51

I confess I had this desire on a few occasions David. When people are out of control , I'm sure a drawn weapon would bring them to their "senses."

"if you can keep your head...."

Thanks for your clear comment. Ray

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