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Open Heart Surgery

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Crack open my ribs
Pull out my heart and
Feast
While I gaze 
In wonderment 
Questioning 
Why 
It
Hurts 

 

Broken hearts

◄ The Circus

Unravelling ...... ►

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Vicki Ayers

Thu 28th Jan 2016 14:29

Thanks Rachael glad you enjoyed it!

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Rachael J. Low

Thu 28th Jan 2016 06:48

Whoa. Powerful in its pure simplicity. Love it!

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Vicki Ayers

Tue 19th Jan 2016 18:48

That I shall Mr C - sound advice! x

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Tommy Carroll

Tue 19th Jan 2016 14:00

Vic, beware guests bearing their own cutlery. Tommy

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