I stir
I hear
I feel the gentle purr
Of your breathing
In the half light of another dawn
That time between night and day
Your sleepy smile
Awakens my desire
To stay
To remain
With you longer
Before rising for another day
The smile
That makes my heart rejoice
That we are still in that place together
After so many years
That we remain
You and I
The beauty of this is such a powerful emotion so simply expressed. Thank you for sharing.
Thanks Ray , this is one of these rare occasions when I just woke up one morning recently and was inspired to put these lines down.
compelling and powerful in its simplicity, Martin.
A sentiment perfectly expressed.
Ray
Thank you both so much R and Andy. I really was in two minds whether to post this or not.
Bless you
tender and lovely, martin.
i know something you should submit this.
if i forget to let you know. email me or text next few days.
andy n
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Fri 22nd Jan 2016 02:18
Martin, this is absolutely beautiful. To have a love endure and still give you those smiles...that is special. Thank you for sharing. I have truly enjoyed it. :)
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Rachael J. Low
Thu 28th Jan 2016 06:58
Simple, beautiful, invites fond memories into one's cranium :)