Smoke room
Still embalmed is the smell, the taste, the colour
In what was once the room of smoke
Where carefully contoured rings blew across
Louche sofa’s and upright leather bar stools
Served by barmen or brassy barmaids
In rooms filled with jaded freshly tousled men
And up and coming starlets, strumpets and harlots
Those once well thought of
Some notorious
Others vain glorious
Often the worse for wear
The like of which were sketched on the back of cigarette cards
To be swapped and collected
Arranged in matching teams and sets
Now like their images
Just cameos of a life well lived
In contrast to the spit and sawdust
Polished wooden tables
With roll out the barrel
Pints of mild and bitter
Port and lemon
Flat caps and tucked in scarves
Where laughter is loud and proud
Arriving and descending in great swathes
Never polite
Never condescending
Just honest
Sometimes rude or naugthy
Never a guffaw or chortle
Whilst in the salons and up town bars
Some sat holding court
Perched on the edge of leather chairs or stools
Where flappers, all feathers and beads
Sit with snappy dressing top hat and tails
Smoking sweet smelling cheroots or cigarettes through
Tooth chewed tortishell holders
Talking of the very latest sensation
Here today, gone tomorrow
Darling have you seen?
Have you heard the most divine?
Ice slinks, chinks and slurps in tumblers
Of Johnny walkers, Gordon’s and Gilbey’s
Whilst stifled controlled laughter
Never pierces or pushes the columns of advancing fog
That wall of mist formed in every quarter
Every saloon, hotel, public bar and boudoir
Holding its’ own against any inward draft.
It’s warm welcome fug an antidote
To anything that might be out there
The other side of highly polished wood and brass
Where finely etched glass is labelled with public, snug, saloon
Or smoke room
The last bastion against that out there
The great unknown
The great outdoors
The open air
Martin Elder
Sat 23rd Jan 2016 22:47
Thanks Ray I count this as a real compliment. Dylan Thomas is my poetry hero