SUPERMARKET SHOALS
all day long the supermarket shoal swelled
subsided
nosed their snouts into lucrative gaps
breathing through blow holes
glistening in their silky coats.
Oblivious of those who dominate them
they glide on their tides
anticipate, perpetrate
managing their own limits, spaces.
Of many colours
they seem to know and share community
and their place as,
seeing in the dark
fleeing, they part
peeling off from the bays of the supermarket.
At night they test other waters
buried in sleep and the subconscious.
raypool
Sat 20th Feb 2016 16:13
Cheers Stu. I conceived this as a description of cars and their parking, but then in going back on it I thought it equally applies to shoppers - then I thought Is there a difference ? One dependent on the other, a lack of creative thought , a certain sense of hopelessness and of being manipulated by the market etc. So this although it might sound pompous I regard as double edged! I think they should re-invigorate the word Hypermarket!
Ray