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Scars are my stories

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Written around me, written within:
scars of my lifetime show on my skin.
This is a tooth I broke in a fight.
Here's where I tumbled, dancing all night.
Sites of injections. Chicken-pox spot.
Name of a lover better forgot.

Words in the open, words never said,
all of my stories hide in my head.
Tell me a story: now, evermore,
life has a pattern hidden before.
Tales of a lifetime carved in my brain
whisper politely: Tell me again.

Hid in a heartbeat, sung to the stars:
scars are my stories, stories my scars.

◄ Ubi caritas

limerick, after "air and light and time and space" ►

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John Coopey

Mon 7th Mar 2016 20:27

Great rhythm worked around the caesuras. As some great man once said, "It's not the notes that count; it's the gaps inbetween".

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Yvonne Brunton

Sat 5th Mar 2016 10:24

A great concept neatly encapsulated. Set me off looking at my old scars and reminiscing. Really enjoyed this.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 3rd Mar 2016 17:29

Truth and humanity's timeless tale wrapped up in a neat
memorable package. Ideal for catching a youthful
imagination and setting it on a lifelong love of verse.

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Trevor Alexander

Thu 3rd Mar 2016 10:34

That's a really good read. Enjoyed it - well done.

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steve pottinger

Thu 3rd Mar 2016 10:28

Lovely work, Thomas.

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