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YOU CAN'T STROKE A SPIDER

You can't stroke a spider

they're just not made that way -

skittish, easily deterred by foolish intentions

 

the hysterics of sudden movement, then

they scuttle into black abysses

peering into the dark

pressed almost flat like paper clips

ready to spring,

and their killing sprees belie their shyness.

 

But in gardens

always the royal highness in a web

on throne of gossamer

when the sun is sullen and on its knees

they draw with gravity the flitting distress

 

They waste not and want not

with their wanton spite,

and are not averse

to afternoon delight.

◄ HYPOCHONDRIA

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raypool

Sun 13th Mar 2016 19:07

Thanks Cynthia -glad that I actually added that line in retrospect to try and open out the vista. The title is like a temptation I feel!

Cheers Martin, I had been a bit quiet on WOL, can't always come up with ideas. Where they come from I don't know.

Mark, they do fascinate me and we can imbue them with the nastier traits that nature always has up its sleeve!
Thanks for all comments.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 13th Mar 2016 18:44

A poem can allow us to see things in a fresh way and
this does just that - with some carefully crafted lines
that adorn the theme in a most rewarding fashion.
The contrast between a spider's dark places and a garden
web is most imaginative, with the uneasy sense of threat
never absent.

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Martin Elder

Sun 13th Mar 2016 17:58

Good poem Ray. I love the title and the closing lines in particular.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 13th Mar 2016 16:48

A 'pot' full of diverse ideas that somehow blend to make a good 'stew'. 'when the sun is sullen and on its knees' is a sparkling line. Excellent title, luring in the reader.

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