undercurrents
undercurrents
I only glimpse it now, so far away, but bright and clear.
The rapture of a fading world - another place, some other year.
Those nights of shattered moonlight strewn on marbled seas,
where frangipani whispers were caresses on the breeze.
From the shadow of the palms I watched you dance
the tideline, shed your silks, and with one glance
you robbed my soul and beckoned with a siren call;
on the crests of glittering waves we traded lives; we gave each other all.
Those times and tides have long since flowed to other shores.
Do you wonder of my island now, as I imagine yours?
Life’s restless waves, where we once played have tossed us far apart,
they wash our footprints from the sand,
but never from the heart.
Jeff Dawson
Thu 13th Aug 2009 08:46
Hi Anthony, I'm just catching up with stuff and read this, its a beautiful poem, great one. I did wonder if the words 'we gave each other all.' would be better as 'we gave our all' but assume you wanted to use those words for the content.
Love the last - they wash our footprints from the sand, but never from the heart - poetry.
Thanx for comment on 'somoeone in particular' yes good to see us men multi-tasking! Can't think what it reminds you of but glad you like it, it does work well as a live performance piece, cheers Jeff