Red Shoes
Sometimes it’s hard
Not to listen to voices
‘Tart’ whispers one
‘Mutton dressed as lamb’
Another
Ruffled feathers
Freeze for a moment
Clipped, one too many times
But the shoes have bonded
And they are dancing
To a different beat
She smiles serenely
With 2 finely varnished nails
Salutes the world
And ‘totters’ precariously
Onto a bright new stage…
Version 3 (Edited by Anthony Emmerson)
Sometimes it’s hard
not to listen to voices,
‘Tart’ whispers one,
‘Mutton dressed as lamb’
another.
Ruffled feathers
freeze for a moment
- clipped one too many times.
But the shoes have bonded,
and they are dancing
to a different beat.
She smiles serenely
with two finely varnished nails
salutes the world,
And totters precariously
onto a bright new stage…
Version 2 (Edited by Winston)
Sometimes it’s hard
not to listen to voices.
“Tart” whispers one.
“Mutton dressed as lamb”’
another. Ruffled feathers
freeze for a moment.
Clipped one too many times.
But the shoes have bonded
And they are dancing…
She smiles serenely
to a different beat and
with two finely varnished nails
Salutes the world!
Then totters precariously
Onto a bright new stage…
© Isobel 2009
winston plowes
Mon 3rd Aug 2009 10:07
Hi Isobel, Thanks for your comments on 3 Ramdom strangers. Had to look back at your red shoes to understand your reference, and there is a line the same isn't there. Coincidence or subliminal? don't know which.
P.S. I turned all my mirrors over years ago, nothing to see.
Win xx