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The Beauty of Love

This thing....

this intangible thing we share

a sub-conscious effort to be

in unison spiritually.

 

Human elements unfulfilled,

emotions we cannot express

in public. Fear keeps us apart

So i save you in my heart.

 

 

 

◄ The Light of Day.

The Devil and Me. ►

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Isobel

Sat 22nd Aug 2009 08:39

Yes - I understand where you are coming from with this Janet - well expressed.

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Jeff Dawson

Sun 16th Aug 2009 08:55

Hi Janet, sounds like you're up to no good Ha! Love this it says so much in a few well chosen and lovely words, Jeff xx

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clarissa mckone

Fri 7th Aug 2009 04:27

very nice janet

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Francine

Thu 6th Aug 2009 22:28

Love it Janet... : )

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Andy N

Thu 6th Aug 2009 21:56

short but i love it, Janet... Nice change off pace for you there.. Keep it up! Woul like to see more in this style!

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Dave Bradley

Thu 6th Aug 2009 15:02

Hi Janet

I liked it too. It's not often someone uses the word effort in connection with love but it's so right and you manage to pull it off

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John Darwin

Thu 6th Aug 2009 14:53

Nice Janet. Love the last two lines.

John

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