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FAMILY SPLIT

An intelligent family man with children

scorned by his father

disallowed disavowed

communication severed

just a dream in their new growing heads

 curious for the true nature of love.

 

His father my brother

a loner, cursing out loud.

We keep in touch, ignoring the cracks

misery paved over by passing feet

on a vaguely familiar street.

 

I try to bridge a gap , unfathomable.

 

Ghosts of possibility deny roots

weeds proliferate

that should bring forth new shoots.

 

 

 

family problems

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raypool

Mon 8th Aug 2016 19:06

Nice assessment Mark; I'm afraid it's very real for me. The sins of the fathers etc...
Thanks for commenting.

Ray

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 7th Aug 2016 19:43

Painful in its reminder how family can create separation
for whatever reason, imagined, invited or invented- and let it fester into long term infection that defies
remedy.

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