THE BULLET'S AIMS
Selection detection projection
these are the bullet's aims
designed for subjection
singly or in a spray
like flowers
let us pray
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A bouquet of bullets, no less. Incisive and effective firepower.
lovely use of words ray. a spray of bullets/a spray of flowers. i love that. i like the layout as well it reminds me of a piece you posted a week or so ago.
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raypool
Sun 7th Aug 2016 12:30
Thanks a lot for the comments and likes. I tried to copy the Knife poem Stu, in format, well spotted. I think the clearer the subject matter , the less words you need. Nice irony David! The power of the B's Mark, nice concoction.
Back to the drawing board for more precision and incision, take the plunge, etc...
Ray