How could I ever be so blind
To miss what was so plain to see
If I unlocked my shackled mind
How could I ever be so blind
With open eyes I’d surely find
Such love I thought could never be
How could I ever be so blind
To miss what was so plain to see
I like the "circular" nature of these lines - carrying truth
not restricted to love alone...and indeed, the former word
could replace "love" in this concise and canny contribution.
If you wish to post a comment you must login.
This site uses only functional cookies that are essential to the operation of the site. We do not use cookies related to advertising or tracking. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.
Stu Buck
Fri 19th Aug 2016 20:53
excellent triolet. quite envious, even though its simple i still file such things under 'things i cannot do' but its pulled off here with aplomb. simple but effective.