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My Gaudi House

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This month's poem was chosen by Ernesto Sarezale. Ernesto says of it, "How is one not to like a poem about Gaudi's poetic architecture? Not only that, Graham Buchan manages to include evocative tributes to other great artists (Van Gogh, Rubens) and a writer (Lawrence) - all of whom I admire.  I love the sardonic, gentle humour in this charming, sensual piece and the way the poet connects the (external) artistic and literary references to an intimate (personal) love affair, arguably blossoming in a hot summer night in Barcelona."

Find out more about Graham and his work at http://www.writeoutloud.net/poets/grahambuchan


My Gaudi House

Gaudi will build me a house
with melting balconies,
and scattered, glistening tiles,
and walls glazed mother-of-pearl.

And in my Gaudi house
Van Gogh will paint me a room
with solid simple furniture:
a bed and chair,
squashed and foreshortened,
and the stars outside
dripping like lanterns.

And in the Van Gogh room
of my Gaudi house
will lie you, a Rubens nude
(You’re slim! I know; I know you’re slim)
but you lie: voluptuous, content, smiling and serene,
and no cellulite.

And I will love you, my Rubens nude,
and as we love,
our love will be recorded by D H Lawrence:
he will chronicle our climax
and pontificate on the meaning
of men and women.

And as we slide down
the other side of love
I will take you, my Rubens nude,
and Van Gogh, and Gaudi, and Lawrence
out, into the hot vibrating night,
under the dripping stars,
and we will go drinking, and dancing.
(And that includes you, D H Lawrence! You’re gonna dance!)


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<Deleted User> (7027)

Thu 19th Nov 2009 07:56

I adore this, it's beautiful.

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Graham Buchan

Tue 3rd Nov 2009 22:51

Thank you for your comments, and especially thank you to Ernesto Sarazale for the generosity of his introduction.

Oh, LS Lowry. Badly over-rated, I'm afraid.

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Neil West

Tue 3rd Nov 2009 22:15

It's a great poem with rich language and tone and such a great concept. I can't help wondering what would happen if one of Lowry's matchstick men came to call though!

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Ross Kightly

Tue 3rd Nov 2009 09:15

Will eventually get this right: though 'specualting' may be OK among consenting adults in private, I think SPECULATING might be more appropriate for this forum. It's still earyl mroning, raelly....

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Ross Kightly

Tue 3rd Nov 2009 09:12

Marvellous poem; read with such conviction and expression - thanks. We chaps always have to be careful with the Rubens simile, don't we? And I've sometimes specualted about a Strictly Come Literary History sort of programme - obviously DHL could kick it off!

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Isobel

Mon 2nd Nov 2009 12:30

A very beautiful poem, with or without the cellulite.

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Julian (Admin)

Mon 2nd Nov 2009 09:04

Beautifully written, superbly read. Thank you.

steve mellor

Mon 2nd Nov 2009 08:34

I commented on this when we were going through the Ernesto experience, but I just wanted to reiterate that I think this poem is stunning, and worthy of a POTM slot. A pity that this one isn't emblazoned on the front sheet to show everyone how a love poem should be written.
The story builds beautifully

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Dave Bradley

Sun 1st Nov 2009 08:24

I really like this - rich in associations and images which enhance each other. It builds a picture full of life and love which is greater than the sum of its parts. Excellent choice

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