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mechanism

sometimes it takes the form of a pocket watch

or a shard of glass

 

we both saw him place the noose around her neck

a choker too tight with diamonds

nails bitten low enough to bleed

 

a sliver of blood blooming at the tip

placed softly like a crustless sandwich between pale chapped lips

tang of iron and medium rare steak         puddles of it now

walk softly, softly through the house

the boards don’t creak they squelch with viscera

that leaks

     

leaks

 

leaks

up through the cracks and soils dainty feet

 

wallpaper melts and foams as

orchids die from the breeze she blows

 

just i saw the clockwork bluebird call before


springs and coils

like a pocket watch

and a cut

a cut like a shard of glass

◄ eleuthoromania

fabric ►

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Stu Buck

Thu 13th Oct 2016 10:54

cheers tom, much appreciated

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Tom Harding

Wed 12th Oct 2016 20:54

nice flow stu, v interesting imagery

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Stu Buck

Mon 10th Oct 2016 19:01

cheers ray, i had a very clear vision when i wrote this so im glad that came across. glad to have you back from wherever you have been.

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raypool

Mon 10th Oct 2016 16:37

Great stuff Stu. I love the expanse of your mind and how it settles on these exquisite and unsettling images. It's no use me trying to analyse your work as it would not suffice to do it justice. There is a sense of taking trouble to bring about mischief - quite compelling and rather erotic in its way.

Ray

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