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alva, who is darkness

alva is who appears at midnight

with a mechanical needle one hundred metres long

sucking bleak black blood from the acne scars of mother

alva is here when i am alone and i lock my door

peeling crescent moons of rose red flesh

alva is the sin

that lets me think i can get away with it

the foolish pride

the gluttony

the decaying colostrum from your darkened nipples

alva is the stress ball

the dirty plates

the drawn curtains

the self imposed, masochistic writers block

alva looks at the curves of girls

alva spurs the advances of simpering family fanatics

oh wow oh wow

here he comes now

alva is bedding that never gets washed

alva is the drooping limp dick cigarette placed between trembling lips

the semen crusted keyboard

the greasy mouse

the greasy mouth

the fridge full of soil

the three days of starvation before payday

alva has never been kissed

alva has fucked every woman

spit in his mouth

piss on his hair

alva hates the medicine

that clips his wings and binds his feet

alva leaves the pills in the corner of his mouth

like a stubborn cat with worms

before tonguing the fizzing demon down the toilet

alva loves me

alva is mine

alva is no one

                on the weekends alva tightens my leash              

the spikes dig into my flesh

the medicine cabinet stays locked

alva swallows the key

i root through his shit on monday morning

until i find the cold, hard metal of release

without alva i would not be me

his shadow haunts my days

at night he burrows deep into my mind

kicking through freudian leaves to find the repression

the bubble wrapped nightmares

alva wont let me turn on the lights

he is static

he is white noise

oh wow oh wow

here he comes now

◄ silt

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Stu Buck

Fri 28th Oct 2016 16:49

thanks everyone.

ray - it is cathartic rather than punishing, especially the place i find myself n ow which is a lot more pleasant than where i have been in the past. there is a drug element involved, i do take certain medication which helps push 'alva' down (alva by the way is a hebrew term for evil which is why i chose it).

natasha - thanks so much, you have picked up on everything i wished to convey!

elP - im glad you picked out those lines. i am very much a believer that everyone has darkness inside them, and to repress it is far more dangerous than to accept that darkness is a part of what shapes our lives.

david - glad you enjoyed it. its funny you should mention your unease as to who the narrator is, as i think that is the most pertinent point. darkness overtakes us all at some point, what joy we can find in poetry that enables us to allow it to control us and yet still find creativity and light.

thanks all, really appreciate you taking the time to give me your feedback and thoughts.

elPintor

Fri 28th Oct 2016 08:40

deep explorer..

"without alva i would not be me
his shadow haunts my days"

..alva is darkness, indeed.

elP

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raypool

Thu 27th Oct 2016 13:25

Heavy shit man. Shades of modern Poe and Gothic drapery with a rush of immediacy . This must be punishing to write Stu. Is there a drug element involved?

regards Ray

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