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Life-Line
C section
Urination
Defecation
Education
Education
Education
Expectation
Occupation
Realisation
Masturbation
Fornication
Masturbation
Fornication
Cohabitation
Procreation
Procreation
Separation
Masturbation
Fornication
Cohabitation
Procreation
Separation
Deprivation
Superannuation
Stagnation
Embrocation
Urination
Defecation
Expiration
Cremation
Trust Gus to notice that! But he is right of course - he is an expert on these matters...and I am a sweet innocent.
Hey up Steve,
The first 'Masturbation' is played in a little late ... just after Education (1).... I think... Later in life
Re-Education?? Deprevation... Elation Creation....Constipation...
Masturbation is best though... Great poem ThanksGus
The best observation of life I have read so far. The word association is beyond reproach. Love it! - and really glad I sat down and read it properly - initially the c-section bit put me off, which after giving birth 5 times I suppose it would -very unique, and love the existential thread that runs through it. It's like a stream of consciousness.
<Deleted User> (5646)
Wed 16th Sep 2009 22:52
Has Spencer offered to perform this one then Steve?
It's certainly different to your other poems.
Janet.x
<Deleted User> (6510)
Wed 16th Sep 2009 17:36
Well it looks as though it's getting an outing next month. Now I have to learn it and then get my poor old asthmatic lungs ready for it.
<Deleted User> (6484)
Wed 16th Sep 2009 17:02
says it all mate, a good un.
bernie
<Deleted User> (6582)
Wed 16th Sep 2009 16:16
really enjoyed this! Good work Steve x
What a fascinating idea Steve - this probably does mirror the lifelines of many modern couples and would rant well - I told you we would have you ranting...
<Deleted User> (6510)
Wed 16th Sep 2009 10:03
I see the masturbation stops when fornication starts. I think this is a cracker and would be great live as a full on Rant.
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Cynthia Buell Thomas
Sat 19th Sep 2009 17:09
Really a clever, a very clever idea, and thought-provoking too. Great stuff.