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one syllable love

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I don't just want one syllable sex

I would much prefer a two syllable romance

That leads to a three syllable commitment

In a stable four syllable relationship


Even sweeter if blessed with five syllable serendipity


But, most importantly, we must be four syllable compatible

Sharing something deeper than three syllable attraction

For without mutual care and two syllable respect

We won't have found one syllable love

 

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Paul Waring

Thu 16th Feb 2017 17:21

Hi Travis, another very kind compliment from you. So pleased you enjoyed this. Much obliged!

Paul

Travis Brow

Thu 16th Feb 2017 14:28

Fantastic Paul. I hadn't twigged the syllable count until I read the other comments; what a dufus! Great stuff.

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Paul Waring

Tue 14th Feb 2017 17:48

Ray, what a wonderful thing to say about this. I felt honoured to read that. How incredibly generous of you.
And happy VD to you too, please accept a man-hug ?

Col, I fear a contagion of VD. There is a tad too much poetic promiscuity on here today ? ?

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Tue 14th Feb 2017 17:18

this VD is catching

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raypool

Tue 14th Feb 2017 17:16

skilfully constructed, wilfully conceived , and thrillfully read Paul. It is that rare thing, a piece contrived that works well.

Ray, happy VD by the way.

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Paul Waring

Tue 14th Feb 2017 16:49

Thank you for reading Trevor. I'm grateful to you for the compliment and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Paul

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Trevor Alexander

Tue 14th Feb 2017 13:40

Clever concept, well written. I really enjoyed this one.

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Paul Waring

Tue 14th Feb 2017 09:15

Col, I hadn't intended to be so PC on VD ??

<Deleted User> (13762)

Tue 14th Feb 2017 08:54

this is so right on man - love and peace on Valentine's Day - or put another way - VD.

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Paul Waring

Tue 14th Feb 2017 08:52

Thank you so much Juan Pablo and Steve, I'm pleased you enjoyed this and really appreciate your kind comments.

Paul

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steve pottinger

Tue 14th Feb 2017 07:33

Really like this one, Paul. Clever and insightful. Bravo!

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Juan Pablo Lynch

Tue 14th Feb 2017 04:11

This is so kawaii - that's Japanese for cute. I really enjoyed counting the syllables myself.

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