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The Revelation of the End of Days.



It was at sunday school one bleak morning
that an ancient one gave me the warning,
that Armeggedon would one day break
causing Death and Chaos in it's wake.

I remember thinking as he ranted,
and in my youthful mind I chanted.
'Seven chances he has given,
seven problems to be solved.
Seven chances to be forgiven,
seven sins to be absolved',
And wondered what was concealed,
in that book,
 that would one day would be revealed.

I pondered on this over time,
and being of an enquiring mind
delved in Politics and Philosophy
and even dabbled in Theology.
Until, a flash of Illumination
bore the fruits of my concentration.

It was then as plain as day to see.
Seven seals,
to be broken by Humanity.
The first four had taken on the Mortality
of Leaders creating War and Polity.

What comes next? Only time will tell,
for many life is already hell.
The fifth seal stands in stark relief.
People dying for their faith and belief.

I await the next in trepidation,
some earthly disaster and indentation.
And then the morning star will rise,
once again, as mankind dies.

A little harsh, may I emphasise,
for those of us who lead reasonable lives.
But, hell, we'll go out in a blaze of glory,
to the resonance of those trumpets 'holy'.

I wonder what comes then,
will a few of us be saved?
to begin the cycle once again
and re-start the Human Race.

And I Hope that they will someday learn
of the brutal lesson we had to earn,
in order to give Humanity,
another chance at Mortality.



◄ Reign Of Terror

The Poem That Should Never Have Been A Poem ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (5646)

Wed 23rd Sep 2009 13:27

Domesday book? Read it seven lifetimes ago.
(sorry, couldn't resist it Nicky) :-)

I enjoyed the sheer honesty which shines through from the author of this write. It shows a deep thinker with a steady note of realism. Some great points made in a subject which is often argued about depending on ones faith in the world and humanity.
I too see an element of fun in this write.
Janet.x

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Nichola Burrows

Tue 22nd Sep 2009 13:39

For anyone who reads and comments, I would like to add that Dave has not gone insane! I edited this after his comment because I thought that he was right and had to have some mention of hope within the final lines. So well done Dave for making a hash of all my twaddle about poetry not being edited once it has been published either on the net or on paper. I humbly eat my words. However it was a very spontaneous editing!

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Dave Bradley

Tue 22nd Sep 2009 13:16

This is the first out and out apocalyptic poem I've run across on WOL. Fascinating. I like it. Brave of you to have a go!

It makes the reader stand back and look at humanity from a cosmic perspective and in doing so raises SO many issues. One thing it doesn't do, which is perhaps worth mentioning, is to include the hope. The original is a very complex and confusing package - suspect anyone who claims to understand it! But it does say, quite clearly, that every tear will be wiped away, there will be no more death and everything will be made new.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 22nd Sep 2009 11:52

I enjoyed this, Nicky. I had to do eyeball acrobatics with the rhyme schemes and discipline my irregular heartbeats with the rhythms, but I know you did that on purpose. You're having fun, aren't you, and your brain is whipping along sort of 'madly'? Relish the rush!

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