Cigarettes and Rum
The shipping forecast reports severe storms
Waves ricochet off rocks along the shore
Out to sea, towering walls of water
Overwhelm the sturdiest of vessels
Which, fight as they might against the currents,
Will concede defeat any second now.
A buoy stays afloat, just, but is itself
Perilously close to going under.
Lightning strikes once, twice, maybe a third time
Or at least that’s the scene I conjure up
While sitting hunched over a Medira
Before it sinks down my oesophagus.
I can almost taste the Atlantic chill.
A deep exhalation makes me think
Of relentless, unforgiving whirlwinds
That merchants somehow tamed, to deliver
The currencies of tobacco and rum
For the sustenance of lesser beings.
It’s clever, this pathetic fallacy
It always seems to manifest itself
When braving the elements proves too much.
Stu Buck
Thu 2nd Mar 2017 11:32
yes, very excellent. you conjure up first a raging sea, then an exotic taste and cap it off with a soupcon of history. i can taste the tobacco.