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Returning Home

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Returning Home

 

Will the birds sing in the garden

Will we go down to the sea

Will we build our castles of sand

Will there still be scones for tea

 

Will my father still be smoking

Will he jog me on his knee

Will summer days still last forever

Will there still be scones for tea

 

Will we dream of great adventures

Will westerns still be on TV

Will we sit around the table

Will there still be scones for tea

 

Will the winter snows still settle

Will we still climb the old oak tree

Will we play cricket in the garden

Will there still be scones for tea

 

Will there still be roaring fires

Will there be a home for me

Will my mother still be waiting

Will there still be scones for tea

 

When all the world has finished turning

When it comes down to you and me

When we have closed our eyes forever

Will there still be scones for tea

nostalgiareturn homefamilyheavenlast dayswishing

◄ Bag Of Bones

This Book Is Bound In Leather And Writ In Blood ►

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 2nd May 2017 19:37

Reminds me of 'the Beatles' and how they might have delivered this work as a song.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 23rd Mar 2017 18:16

Warmly welcome - a consoling consideration of what it
was to be young for many of us...with that unanswerable
yearning to return to the comfort of what we knew but
cannot come again...in tandem with the lines of "Blue
Remembered Hills" (from "A Shropshire Lad").

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raypool

Thu 23rd Mar 2017 16:28

A poem of acceptance I feel of a view back through nostalgia and of course unsettling while pensive. You express the wonders that we all felt in safety.

Nice one Ian, especially with the repeated last lines each time.

Ray

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