glacial
hand movements
a tracking shotÂ
slow motion sparkler tails
write your name in the midnight air
watch as the ashes disperse
the last thing you ever did
was ask a question
maybe you will find the answer
in sweet dreamless sleep
Love the last three lines of this Stu. Very powerful and hard hitting poem
Hi Stu,
Another fabulous title Stu.
A magical realist vibe; I'm a sucker for this kind of verse. You evoke images so beautifully, effortlessly..
Thanks for sharing.
Suki
Born and lives in the imagination where it is entirely at home, Stu. A bit of magic!
Ray
You have such a gift Stu. This poem is so rich with words and images. Great stuff.
Paul
I like that Stu.
A wonderful idea expressed so succinctly.
You were pretty economic with words there.
Raj
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Stu Buck
Mon 27th Mar 2017 18:22
cheers guys. glad you all liked it, i have been enjoying all your work as well, sorry if i seem a little less active nowadays i am trying to use the computer less in general as its naughty and bad.