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Lucy’s Lament

They sang about Lucy ‘neath marmalade skies,

With slowly responding kaleidoscope eyes

That dwelt on the flowers of yellow and green,

Where the rocking horse people skipped to the scene.

 

But the cellophane diamonds were pie in the sky,

Made of marshmallow piled ever so high,

In newspaper taxis where we read it all,

And sun in your eyes kept your face to the wall.

 

The fountain’s still spouting there down by the bridge,

And people so cool ‘cause they live in a fridge;

But boats on the river have all had their day,

And Lucy has long since been taken away.

 

 

 

 

With apologies to Messrs Lennon & McCartney

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Martin Elder

Fri 7th Apr 2017 18:13

for a moment I misread the two lines to do with marshmallows and cellophane which made me think of a box of weekend chocolates for those old enough to remember of which our local shop at the time had a dummy display box made of cellophane. Don't know where I was going with that. None the less a very good poem Trevor

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Paul Waring

Fri 7th Apr 2017 08:29

Very funny Trevor and top marks for:

'And people so cool 'cause they live in a fridge'

Paul

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Trevor Alexander

Thu 6th Apr 2017 20:16

Wow - that's nearly as surreal as the song...

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Thu 6th Apr 2017 19:57

I saw the title and thought Australopithecus AL 288-1 aka "Dinkinesh" in Ethiopia which means "you are marvellous" according to Wikipedia. It's been a strange journey from learning to walk upright to taking LSD and not being able to walk and thinking we can fly.

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