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Introduction to my poetry

This is not just another piece of paper with writing scrawled on it

These are not just words written to go in the bin

You may think my poetry’s as joke but my patience is wearing thin

This not just a rant form the pulpit of this poetry preacher

I seek to show my ability even as a teacher

This is not just doggerel a pathetic verse that gets progressively worse

This is my poetry and I feel its worth within my heart and soul

This poetry wild and free

A communication between you and me

A visionary glance at my life and what I see

This my poetry I give it to you from me

Your mind is the door

And this poetry is the key!

◄ Please love this naked heart

To just be! ►

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 11th Oct 2009 14:54

Yes, I totally agree about keys and doors, and giving and receiving etc - spot on. I'm not sure about 'visionary' in this context; visual maybe. Actually, I'm not keen to see your 'life' at all, but your mind is open territory.

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Tommy Carroll

Mon 5th Oct 2009 00:49

Daniel You are correct: That poetry IS the key and this mind opens vistas...beautiful and otherwise...If this is a 'door' I and others enter...wonders upon wonders behove!...(well it Is a Sunday...)

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