rainy day in may
The cafes alive today
The throbbing throng
of hardy rained soaked song
in idle chatter
of weather, all too much
baby’s prams and buggies
mothers aging matriarchs
food frying toasted boiling baking
plates of omelettes toast sausage
egg and chips
steaming tea mocha latte
coke and 7 up
mugs cups and chinking glasses
pensioners sit in silent stare
of mock retreat from advancing years
and he sits on his own
a tousled shocking hair amok
talking to himself
his thoughts pacing up and down
shaking ready to repair
after downed cup of coffee
it’s to the outside world
and through nicotine heavy bearded breath
to smoke another treasured cigarette
Martin Elder
Thu 1st Jun 2017 19:24
Thanks Kim, Colin, Cynthia and David
Thanks for you reference to count Arthur strong Colin. I love the tap dancing shoes. You are possibly right about the Arthur brightening up any cafe.
thanks for the incisive comments once again Cynthia. Now I re-read I think you are right and will amend. I know my editing skills are not always what they should be much appreciated.
David you are so right, every café has its regular characters, it must been fascinating with the one you talk about being a celebrity. the one that I mentioned is a regular and gives the impression of barely tolerating the world and all who reside in it.
Thanks again everybody its always encouraging to get feed back from other poets
Cheers Martin