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Kairos

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Time attaches itself to things

turning moments into memory,

until the past and the future

flood the present

so you sit feeling

neither here nor there,

restless in bullying heat,

squinting at white sails

on glittering water

that won’t move when watched.

Rescued only when the blue hills darken

and you open the wine

and watch the gardener

with the stooped back

approach amongst the olive trees,

his dark skin glowing

darker in the dusk,

as he comes to unfasten the hose

and set about the terracotta pots,

just as he did yesterday evening

and, you imagine, every evening;

night after night

carefully untethering the hose

and stretching it across the flagstones

to flood the night flowers,

irises and lilies, cultivating growth

and bringing relief,  

one small gasp at a time.

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raypool

Wed 7th Jun 2017 23:12

A sort of Somerset Maugham suffocating familiarity about this Tom. Etched in heat and unfolding achingly in its own time. The opening two lines are a triumph; flooding the present is replicated in the unwinding hose too.

I'm jealous. Lovely quality reading.

Ray

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Wed 7th Jun 2017 07:29

there is something very compelling and enviable in the simple life of a gardener or peasant farmer which many of us only rarely get to glimpse and wonder at - our own complicated hurdy-gurdy lives having spun off in multitude directions that never quite connect sufficiently with the soil for long enough or in meaningful and lasting ways.

The title could almost be the name of a Greek village or holiday villa - in fact what a great name for a villa or a boat or bungalow back home. So much to wonder at here Tom and admire too. Thanks for posting.

Col.

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