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Midsummer

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In northern Europe on Midsummer's Eve

the day is indiscernible from night

so you sit outside at midnight

with loved ones and people you barely know,

eating strawberries and drinking wine

attempting to conjure the spirits

of future lovers from the pine woods.

Imagine how drunk you'd be there

inhaling air off a mirrored lake,

picture how clear your thoughts would become,

you might begin to think you were

a character from folklore.

Imagine the mischief you might get up to

with the sun refusing to lie down

and pulling at the shadows.

Imagine the kisses you could steal on such a conceit

believing morning was never coming

to wipe the slate clean.

Imagine the lies you could tell yourself

If you thought this life

might run on forever.

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◄ Kairos

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Tom Harding

Mon 12th Jun 2017 00:37

hi all, thanks for your kind comments. I'm not sure this one came out right so appreciate the thoughts.

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raypool

Sun 11th Jun 2017 22:09

I sense a sort of weary acceptance and the reflection of the mind out on a leash Tom. A lovely pensive delicacy runs through it, and shows you have a fine feeling for the subtle pleasure and how cunningly set up they can be, and easily they depart. The last three lines are brilliant to my mind.

Ray

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Kim Whysall-Hammond

Sat 10th Jun 2017 09:39

Yup, I'm now caught imagining too............

<Deleted User> (13762)

Sat 10th Jun 2017 09:07

I am imagining

thanks

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