Sun top table bare
Its Friday and it’s four o’clock
At the gardener’s arms
And the boys are at the bench
Shirts off
Sun out
Baking staking hot
The beers are in
The smokes are out
The jokes are flying
And dying like swatted flies on table tops
But laughter pervades none the less
Across reddened sultry crowns and cheeks
Where bare bravado reigns
In the hope
Of topless golden skin
Like the amber nectar
They swallow down
In great heaving gulps
Martin Elder
Fri 23rd Jun 2017 18:10
Thanks to All for reading this piece glad you all enjoyed. This was a scene I viewed a few weeks back, one Friday afternoon as I sat in a car at some traffic lights waiting for them to change right by this local pub.
I did toy with the idea of making it longer Colin but I think Cynthia's right it's plenty long enough. I can have a tendency some times to witter on and on and......yawn.
Anyway thanks again everybody. Cheers!