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VARIETY ARTISTS

"It's the laughter lines you see

they stay with you right through thick and thin

eyes you can hide, but not the lines

the network changing constantly

 

like the points in the rails you keep going over

in sluggish and sullen towns.

They don't mean us any harm the audiences

but you need to earn every penny

 

we take 'em out of their drudgery

eight to five lives doing what destiny tells 'em

we bring a bit of light

slap and tickle, eye make - up

 

it's always been that way with variety.

It all makes you fall about with laughter

but that's what we're after.

Who else could do that?

 

Without that surge of acceptance

how could we beat this unsinkable pain?

With our extraordinary and tricky talents

learnt with sweat on the run

 

we up sticks and stay in digs

it may seem glamorous to some.

By the way: one of those days

I could have been famous, son."

 

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◄ WHEN LONELINESS CALLS

WHEN SANTA COMES TO STAY ►

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raypool

Tue 25th Jul 2017 20:28

Thanks Mark. It is certain that the practitioners of the art of entertaining do need to have scope to portray all emotional ranges, but their own experiences were often lonely and hunted by the life itself. Still, it was good money and kept them out of factories.

David, thank you for giving me the inspiration for this poem. I picked a role and gathered my poetic wares in a seedy bag of pick and mix. The clip is exactly right. Pants down time - Rod Steiger was wonderful. He portrayed W.C Fields once. I was told once that when Tommy Steele was top of the bill at a theatre -he peeked through the curtain to see how many were in house. An aged comedian tapped him on the shoulder and said: "That's it son, you bring 'em in and we'll entertain 'em."

Thank you Harry. Always nice to get your affirmation - from a master of the genre. I tried the conservational mode as I felt it was more in your face.

Suki, good to hear from you on this one. I chose a tired Liverpool accent - passable I hope. So many comics used to come from there until it started to become respectable and self consciously cultured.

Col: I so much enjoyed the Alexei Sayle show, magic and the outfit so right. I remember a resident host in a club I worked in called Ron Twist. He used to pace the stage nervously and always say: "It's comedy over this side, and tragedy over here." The band regarded it as their duty to keep a straight face.

Love to all and especially to all the likers!

Ray

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Tue 25th Jul 2017 08:55

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suki spangles

Tue 25th Jul 2017 04:01

Hi Ray,

I agree with both Harry and David - poignant and weary journeyman being darkly ironic. Wonderfully read too.

Cheers
Suki

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Harry O'Neill

Mon 24th Jul 2017 21:00

Ray,
I like the poignancy in that `those` and `could have been` in the last stanza...Also the truth in lines seventeen and eighteen.

(not to forget the neatly stanzed shape)

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 24th Jul 2017 16:04

A reminder that behind the laughter lies the sadness of
thwarted hopes and ambitions...the two faces immortalised
in a famous theatrical mask. The "lines" cleverly cross the visual and the verbal in this particular context.
I'm reminded of a photo I took of my sister which I like a
lot - but she doesn't...because (altho' she won't say) it shows very visible "laughter lines" stretching away from her
eyes as she smiles. Vanity, vanity...all is vanity!

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