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Lares et panates

 

Warm wife and cold wine

Both waiting for me at home.

Lares et panates.

 

Grandchildren call round

On a summer’s afternoon.

Noisy wee buggers.

 

Sitting quietly

Contemplating city life.

Home in a high rise.

 

City behind me

Cooling glass of dry white wine

Warm summer sunset.

 

Village cricket ground

Grandson opening the bat.

Pennine happiness.

 

Cat taps on window

I’m cold and wet in the snow,

Can I share your warmth?

 

Snowball hits window,

“Those bloody kids” walking past

bring back memories

 

Dip toe in water

Of forty-four years ago.

Teenager awakes.

 

Snuggle into quilt

after four mile walk in snow

And sleep for ten hours

 

My front door key is

Passport to peace and quiet,

Subject to grandkids

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Alan McKean

Sat 24th Oct 2009 13:16

Hi Gus,

not sure what the group word would be, "Music" sounds good.
I've tried this idea before, but earlier attempts didn't seem to hang together as well.

Thanks for the read

Alan

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Gus Jonsson

Sat 24th Oct 2009 09:08

Great poem Alan love the tightness and construction via Haiku..... I wonder is there a group word for a collection.... ..A 'Music' of Haiku.... A ??

Gus

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 23rd Oct 2009 21:09

Me, too.

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Alan McKean

Thu 22nd Oct 2009 19:55

Thanks Freda,
it was meant as a collection of 10 separate haiku for 3 Lights Gallery. In the end, they only used the last one, but I kept it as a single piece,
glad you enjoyed it,
Alan

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Freda Davis

Thu 22nd Oct 2009 19:21

I really like the way the small stanzas jump about in time, the way memories do when you sit and think, and the last stanza brings you right back to where you are, and the peace, and the openness to interruption by grandkids. Lovely poem Alan.

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