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My Love sits astride Another's Love

As I another sit,

My Love holds Another's hand

While Another's gaze is met.

Another watches  My Love's mouth

As I another watch,

My Love speeks Another's name

But My Love its troth I catch.

◄ Persephone's Filthy Dream

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 23rd Oct 2009 20:36

I never took this in as actual sex in progress; more the triangular situation which could be manifested anywhere, in a crowded room perhaps, tempting and daring, but extremely discreet, and therefore very sensual.

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Gus Jonsson

Fri 23rd Oct 2009 17:04

I've been to a party like this... still got a key or two missing... better than bridge!

Gus

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Isobel

Fri 23rd Oct 2009 16:59

Thanks - I understand now - I think... It wasn't obvious that the gaze was to the one watching - that does change it completely. Fascinating - relationships can be very complex.

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Isobel

Fri 23rd Oct 2009 13:41

Perhaps I misunderstood it Tommy. I assumed that the beloved had found someone another, leaving her ex lover to watch her start over with someone else. Perhaps that was naive and this is in fact a menage a trois where the watching is all part of the fun....Perhaps you could explain or does that go against the grain?

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Isobel

Fri 23rd Oct 2009 08:49

A clever one - I like the play of words on this. Sad though.

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