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1930's STREET MAP OF LONDON

"Luftwaffe Luftwaffe where have you been?"

to London they say to cause a scene

a firestorm of devastation

a lesson of war to bow the nation.

 

Now as I look through a magnifier

at the 30's map the view distorts

under the glass bulging swaying as my vision shifts

north jerking west hither and thither

 

 ink runs with the camouflage of streets

now history is silent, gone away from

 black veins of railway yards choked off

feeding factories docks canals fanning out

 

all have gone the way of progress

bomb doors have rusted away

all the skeletons stacked

 

my glass my spy glass

still sees serrated roofs and hairline cracks

that split my mind

with legacies of histories left behind

 

Luftwaffe Luftwaffe what did you see

your duties hard wired to destiny?

Over my shoulder some fleeting breath

I sense and a night - veiled flight of death. 

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raypool

Tue 19th Sep 2017 10:33

Thanks for your comment Hannah, a nice compliment - very welcome.

Ray

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Mon 18th Sep 2017 21:13

Powerful poem. Read it 3 times .

Thank you for your comment on my poem The Grass. Really appreciated.

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raypool

Mon 11th Sep 2017 15:03

I just responded in full and lost the internet and the comment too! Here goes with fingers crossed.

As an aside to this I was born just before an air raid on Turnham Green which caused a lot of damage and noise. I often wonder how that affected me at three weeks old.

Thanks Stu. Glad you liked this - I was stuck on the idea of a cockpit and the views through glass. Yes apparently the first raids were in retaliation of our own heavy bombing.

Thanks Col. I have added four lines as suggested, I think that does close the poem better perhaps!

David, I think the metaphor is right as you say about the spy glass, and it brought to mind too the cockpit experience. Maps can bring up the past and I am a voyeur. Britain reconstructed quite late after the war and there was a sense of desolation and dereliction . Just what I enjoyed as a boy! You certainly have brought out some salient points about history. Particularly the conception of the Empire was endemic in the 50s on maps. I will try a poem about Dresden if I can do it justice. Thanks for your like Philip!
Much appreciated. Love all around. Ray

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Mon 11th Sep 2017 08:40

another terrific poem Ray although I was hoping for a reprise of the Luftwaffe nursery rhyme at the end. Maybe a rejig of the last two verses? Whatever, it's good as always. All the best, Col.

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Stu Buck

Mon 11th Sep 2017 02:28

lovely ray. great language throughout and a real sense of sorrow throughout. i shudder to think what damage was done to those men, quite apart from the physical.

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