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Bingo

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Flames licked round the twisted kite

 

and there stood Bingo Mearman,

 

he'd fought the fire with all his might

 

to save a single airman,

 

and as he gazed into the blaze,

 

sweat running down his brow,

 

his mind it wandered far away,

 

not if, not who, but how?

 

 

 

 

 

He threw his goggles to the ground

 

and zipped his jacket high,

 

prepared to make the sacrifice

 

for brothers from the sky,

 

dipped his shoulders, ducked his head,

 

and lead with one blind arm,

 

entered the burning fuselage

 

with disregard for harm.

 

 

 

 

 

 

The hot air took his breath away.

 

The heat it dried his eyes.

 

He stumbled through the wreckage as

 

he headed to their cries,

 

his inner self spoke reason

 

and comforted his fear,

 

probables were held at bay,

 

we find a hero here.

 

 

 

 

 

 

An inferno now raged within

 

him and the stricken plane,

 

flicked images of loved ones who

 

he may never see again,

 

but programmed now he soldiered on,

 

a blanket wrapped around

 

his reasoning and terror;

 

death's cries the only sound.

 

 

 

 

 

 

So fierce was the furnace now,

 

that as the crew were sighted,

 

poor Bingo he was unaware

 

his hair had since ignited.

 

Just as he reached a grasping hand

 

and saw a melting face

 

he felt the pain deep in his brain;

 

the terror of this place.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Outside he heard calls of his name,

 

whilst inside no voice broke,

 

his lungs were scorched and shrinking now,

 

his throat burned to a choke.

 

Futility washed over him

 

and fuelled up the firestorm,

 

his soles had melted to the spot,

 

the flames were now a swarm.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

He stumbled as he made his way,

 

fell to his hands and knees,

 

the molten aluminium

 

removed his skin with ease.

 

Spontaneously his tunic

 

unified with this hellhole,

 

he retreated to unconsciousness

 

to join the valour scroll.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Somehow some lads from 442

 

retrieved his charred remains,

 

but didn't gain acknowledgement

 

for the courage of their pains.

 

They didn't seek, and none required,

 

honours, awards, returns,

 

instead they carried memories

 

scarred deep within their burns.

◄ Dereggub

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Dave Bradley

Wed 2nd Dec 2009 09:06

I liked this Chris. It's vivid and poignant

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Christopher Dawson

Wed 25th Nov 2009 21:31

Well I fear that is generally true Cate, tho we are still getting the opportunity display it as a national trait on a regular basis.

Cheers TC, appreciated.

Chris.

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Cate Greenlees

Wed 25th Nov 2009 17:21

How sad. Heroism is in short supply these days with the" turn the other way and ignore it "society we live in.
cate xx

<Deleted User> (7073)

Tue 24th Nov 2009 23:11

Like this one, it has mostly everything you would want in a poem, strong theme , good cadence and it rhymes to boot !!!! nice one.
TC

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