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Moaning Minnies Need To (Edited and OK'd B. Maryon)

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Not wishing to ruffle no feathers

I passed this by Brian Maryon

Great poem don just go and post it

So here I am, to post it on

 

(Aside)

 

You'll notice my grammar's atrocious

My head, it is , well, kinda shot

But that's what God ended up giving me

So sorry folks, that's what I've got

 

Now to the title of my poem ...

 

Moaning minnies need to

Be driven outa town

All they're bloody doing

Is pulling all us down

 

I know we all have bad days

When skies are dark and grey

Let's bring some comic verse back

And drive the clouds away

 

Why's there so much serious

Poetry on this site ?

Where have all the Goons gone ?

(They've chuckled out of sight)

 

I think of Cook and Dudley

The mischief, Benny Hill

They helped us all to neutralise

In life, those bitter  pills

 

So I will go and sit down

And pull out from my mind

Things to make us chuckle and

Leave serious behind

 

Don Matthews May 2018

◄ I'm Sorry if I'm Larrikinish

The Giraffe and the Tree ►

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Don Matthews

Wed 30th May 2018 04:14

Thankyou Ray, MC (and BM). I'm always a little on edge when introducing myself into new territory. I'm a bit larrikinish and can ruffle feathers. Then I keep reminding myself of Dr Seuss "Be what you are and say what you feel 'cause those who matter don't mind and those who mind don't matter"

Brian - I look forward to continued commentation (?) as we help to inject a little fun and frolic into this site

Don ?

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raypool

Tue 29th May 2018 21:32

It's a fair cop guv'nor. I think there should be a bit of lighter fare along with the full English Don. I look forward to more fun and frollix.

Ray

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 29th May 2018 16:28

The essence is effervescent and understood - and with BM
to comment will surely bubble along with appreciating ease.

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Don Matthews

Tue 29th May 2018 15:43

Thankyou. I'm just a learning poet finding my feet in new territory. Yes, I'm sure I will improve.

<Deleted User> (18980)

Tue 29th May 2018 13:10

No offence but just for the record, I didn't say it was great...I just said you should post it rather than send it to me privately Don.

It's okay though...I'm sure you'll improve.

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Don Matthews

Tue 29th May 2018 09:29

Thankyou Brian for helping me avoid new-comer feather-ruffling. ?

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