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DOO LANG A LANG

Little white clouds

write out louds

(cockney rhyming slang).

 

It don't mean nothing

so it must mean something

a bit like doo lang a lang.

 

This doggerel is not designed to impress

and what it means

is anyone's guess.

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raypool

Wed 6th Jun 2018 18:36

I'm glad you got the chuckle muscle going Darren, thanks!

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Wed 6th Jun 2018 09:27

that made me giggle! Cheers!

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raypool

Tue 5th Jun 2018 21:14

Thanks David. I have always been afflicted (or blessed)with a strange sense of reality. With the tangled skeins of nightmare realism confronting us it is a relief to throw a bit of insane logic into the mix IMO.


I can see how you fixed on that tune Martin. That's the power of lyrics! I think I also see a parallel with Old Man River, again the power of lyrics.


Thanks Brian for that. Yes, it's remarkable how often this kind of doggerel appeared in lyrics.


I'm ok thanks Suki. I think this should really be Doo lally.


Yes they were a bargaining chip in those days - a sort of meaningless gap filler.


This is getting interesting Graham - what have I started!
I think your example is one of the better ones of the genre.

I quite agree about that David. It brings light relief to more weighty considerations. Almost gravity defying !
Thanks.

My particular favourite is Blue Moon with that long introduction by the Platters. I can't quote it in full though....


Thanks for liking, Rachel Hannah and Anya.

Thanks everyone for enjoying the poem.

Ray

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 4th Jun 2018 12:26

my first thoughts went to The Chiffons song "he's so fine" but on hearing it again I hear them sing....

doo lang doo land doo lang!

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Mon 4th Jun 2018 08:19

many hundreds of years ago - in the 1950's I believe - it was obligatory for all pop songs to contain doo lang a lang type lyrics. Of course that was way before my time . . . ?

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suki spangles

Mon 4th Jun 2018 00:22

Made me smile, Ray!

Hope you're keeping well.

Suki

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Sun 3rd Jun 2018 18:24

It's the warm weather...it does that to you.

David...Bay City Rollers was Shang a Lang. I loved them...pure pop. Happy Scotsmen... that's not something you see often.

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Martin Elder

Sun 3rd Jun 2018 15:17

It don't mean a thing if it ain't got that swing' Sorry it just reminded me of this old Count Basie tune.
Love the poem Ray

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