I fucked you in a mirror,
I fucked you on a dance floor,
in the kitchen
in the garden too;
it may seem all the same to you
but i'm proud of my backgrounds,
scenes of spice,
sometimes I forget just where
and really, does anyone care
if i'm Roger Moore or Mack the Knife?
It's just a fucking part of life.
Readers of this may notice the incorrect use of "Rights" rather than "Rites" in the title. One of you discreetly pointed that out. Taking it on the chin, I decided to leave it in even though it was a mistake on my part. It's all a good game, and perhaps it may appeal as an alternative spelling just to show how clever I am!
(just testing). Ray
<Deleted User> (18118)
Mon 6th Aug 2018 09:00
I love the abandon of this one.
Hannah
Big Sal
Mon 6th Aug 2018 00:42
Powerful, concise, and enjoyed it.?
<Deleted User> (18980)
Sun 5th Aug 2018 15:54
Tanya, a prop forward, took the top position when we made love at sunset on Primrose Hill. It left a big impression on me.
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raypool
Mon 6th Aug 2018 13:16
Thanks David. There is a glaring gap between what Christian thinking defends, namely the glory of union and the lusts of the flesh as we all know. One seems a parody of the other. I dated a prostitute(no charge) once who seemed to like me, she thought my Morris Traveller was cool. It was a joyless lliason but she thought Hampstead Heath was the right place. I remember the sense of freedom it gave me.
Your altar scene made me think of a Dennis Wheatley novel!
I think you may not to have go through the fire being an atheist. Keep fair sex in please - often just a dream.
Glad you appreciated the poem.
Brian, sorry mate I got there before you, 1975 or 76. I think Primrose Hill is much more romantic. Have I not seen Tanya's name somewhere?
Thanks Big Sal, always appreciated.
Cheers Hannah - I was having second thoughts on using the F word, but it did add impact, so I left it in.
Thanks for the likes, Jon ,Anya and Darren !
Ray