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Comparing Mythologies

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The Chinese girl

Always fell asleep if she drank beer.

So in the evening we sat

In the cafe beside her campus,

Talking over coffee.


The door kept blowing open

With a parade of red face students,

All thin and puckered up from the cold.


We discussed our parents,

Our respective states,

Our histories and mythology.


What was difficult for her

Was not the miracles or the plagues

Or even the water turning into wine

But the fantastical idea that one man

Would throw it all in for the sake of this world.

Harder to picture, she said,

Than four armed gods or elephant heads.


I didn't know, I say.

The waiter would bring over more coffee

Before we'd finish the last.

Outside emaciated looking men

Clutched their jackets and begged for change,

Staring into pitiless winds.

Defense Of The Drunken Poet ►

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Tom Harding

Sat 13th Feb 2010 14:44

Thanks again for the comments.

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Isobel

Sun 7th Feb 2010 20:59

I hadn't read this before today. I just wanted to say that I really like the ideas behind it. I think I am a bit like the Chinese girl - what impresses me about Christianity is its simple message - that we should put the needs of others before our own. Your last stanza is a sad reflection on a world without that vision.

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Rachel McGladdery

Sun 10th Jan 2010 22:13

I really like this, I love that it's done with a light touch, just like the beautiful picture. Thanks for your comment on mine by the way,
Rachel
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Tom Harding

Fri 8th Jan 2010 13:33

Hi all,
Thanks for your kind comments.

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Fri 8th Jan 2010 12:51

I've read this over and over and it's deceptive in its simplicity.
Very enjoyable to read and contemplative.

Janet.x

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 7th Jan 2010 12:14

A great poem - like Pandora's Box - full of flooding ideas just leaping out of the barely-lifted lid. Or maybe - civilization in a thimble.

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 7th Jan 2010 08:39

A subtle, carefully made poem. Nice to see you blogging. Lovely picture too!

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 6th Jan 2010 20:12

So much for gods then? Nice work Tom.

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