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More than a puzzle

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Simple when you know how

when you don't

when it will not yield its secret

tormenting

 

There in my hands is the answer

easy years ago, not now. How?!!

and how could I have forgotten?

bamboozling

 

It is becoming obsessive

playing on what passes for my mind

it is getting out of proportion

excruciating

 

A child masters it with ease

with grace, panache and flair

while my adult fumbles achieve nothing

humiliating

 

I try to find a funny side

to most of life's defeats

but there is no humour in this struggle

demoralising

 

oh

 

so simple

so mind-bendingly, head-bangingly simple

 

Sigh

 

Why so little sense of triumph?

 

Now where is someone else.......

to feel superior to

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Steve Regan

Fri 15th Jan 2010 11:15

On one level simple, on another, a conplicated piece. For me the most interesting themes in this are: the frustration of ageing; and the nature of defeat. Do we learn more from winning or losing /failing? I doubt that philosophers will ever agree on that one. Thanks for coming to LIVERpoetry launch, Dave. Hope I wasn't too pissed as MC ... I didn't have time for me tea, you see.

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winston plowes

Mon 11th Jan 2010 00:05

Recycle it as paper clips Dave
Win

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 9th Jan 2010 18:20

A lot of philosophy tucked into this in a chuckling way. Well-written and completely engaging from start to finish. Ending is great! Nothing like a good question. Made me think of a puppy teasing a rag and just getting totally bored, dropping it and sniffing around for more responsive entertainment.

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Isobel

Fri 8th Jan 2010 17:13

A little bit of brute force works wonders... who's got time to bother fiddling around.... . Having said all that, I did, last night. Enjoyed listening to this at the Everyman - it went down well - and no the puzzle really didn't take me more than half an hour to sort out - I just got distracted by all those poets who wouldn't shut up....

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Fri 8th Jan 2010 13:15

and it all comes together when we just get on with doing it and stopped trying to figure it out. I think that's why children find them so simple.
It has nothing to do with logic. :-)
Fascinating!
Janet.x

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Noetic-fret!

Thu 7th Jan 2010 18:22

Hi Dave, it does seem as if many are just out for betterment of each other. Maybe that's why so many say there is something wrong with human nature. I just want to say, i like your poem, and to be honest, i been at the rubiks cube for 32 years and i still dont have a clue.

stay well

Mike

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Tommy Carroll

Thu 7th Jan 2010 16:27

Dave, your words have resonance for me.

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