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Re-pedestrianized with snow 

with metalled melted ice

under-the -foot

and under-zero

step just once but look at twice.


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DG

Sun 10th Jan 2010 23:30

no need for tankas or cinquains. It's fine as a non-rhyming limerick.

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jean lucy thompson

Sun 10th Jan 2010 23:23

Aww well was taken over two years ago eeek (prob is dont know how to change it )

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Dave Bradley

Sun 10th Jan 2010 20:33

Enjoyed this Tommy. A government minister has now assured us it will be alright to clear outside out houses - we won't get sued. So that's OK. Thanks for commenting on Puzzled.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 10th Jan 2010 12:56

Super, Tommy. Your brain cells are whizzing. The first line is out-standing. Are there enough syllables to arrange into a tanka or cinquain? Just curious.

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winston plowes

Sun 10th Jan 2010 08:34

Thought the title was brilliant to this one Tommy... take care on those roads. Win

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