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Naughtiness Unnoticed

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Naughtiness Unnoticed

Preamble

I have been asked to write a poem on children.  Here is my contribution.

 

How can I write a poem

About a naughty boy ?

When I was good, so helpful

My mother's pride and joy

 

It seems I have inherited

My mother's be-nice genes

Transferred them to my daughters

No naughtiness have I seen
 

I coasted along quite nonchalantly

Naughtiness unaware

Until I saw my daughters in

The French Folies Bergere

 

The moral of my story

Is share life with your child

Take an interest in what they do

To stop them running wild

 

Don Matthews September 2018

 

Dancer at 1.50 for Brian's attention

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Don Matthews

Mon 1st Oct 2018 05:01

Clever verse MC ?

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 30th Sep 2018 16:32

But some might see a life enhancer
In a girl choosing work as a sole pole dancer!
The singular version of those who were there
Performing on stage at the Folies Bergere.

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Don Matthews

Sat 29th Sep 2018 15:44

Dancer at one five
Knocked Brian out cold so it seems
He dumbstruck poor boy

Where is his comment?
Still getting over bare bod?
He still dumbstruck boy

Oh dear...

<Deleted User> (19836)

Sat 29th Sep 2018 14:46

Excellent Don! Rhyme, structure and an important message all rolled into one...impressive!

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 29th Sep 2018 14:23

Loved this poem Don ?

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