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So Says The Wife

 


Adam was gullible
when given his life

Eve found a fruit
she thought he might like

When offered the apple
he took a big bite

An error on his part
so says the wife.
 

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jennifer Malden

Sat 20th Oct 2018 16:35

Short and snappy! My Male Inadequacy has a diff point of view! As Big Sal says one could do a Bible series!

Jennifer

Big Sal

Fri 19th Oct 2018 17:55

You could turn this into a series.

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