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The Face

 

A page upon

which many lines are written

 

a photo album

of the past

 

the face becomes

a mirror back in time

 

as age becomes

a caricature

 

a book with pages

worn from use

 

the face of life

so unaccomplished

 

yet reminding us

of those forgotten years

 

a life still worth

the living.

 

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◄ So Says The Wife

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sun 21st Oct 2018 00:02

Age hard to deal with when the body betrays the mind...good poem D.K. ?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sun 21st Oct 2018 00:02

Age hard to deal with when the body betrays the mind...good poem D.K. ?

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Hazel ettridge

Sat 20th Oct 2018 17:39

First two lines perfect.

Big Sal

Sat 20th Oct 2018 15:30

"Age becomes a caricature." - excellent quote.

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