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A turtle's slow

but surely knows

he is secure

his shell is home

 

He hesitates

is slow to go

takes all he has

to cross the road

 

Why rush

or hurry to and fro

in time he'll get

where he wants to go

 

It makes no sense

to further roam

his shell's his

very mobile home.

 

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Big Sal

Tue 30th Oct 2018 02:38

You feeling better yet? Was gonna poke you with a stick to see if you were, but I couldn't find one long enough to do so yet.?

All literary feuds aside, I feel like this turtle should race one of Taylor's chickens. I'd put money on that!?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Mon 29th Oct 2018 17:19

I enjoyed this poem D.K. Thank you ?

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