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Leaving Home

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Preamble

This weeks Saturday Rymers Club theme is leaving home.  Here is my contribution

 

Leaving Home

 

The giant oak grew alongside us

A green majestic dome

When autumn came it did it's thing

And went and leaved our home

 

Don Matthews November 2018

 

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Hugh

Sun 11th Nov 2018 00:09

This was oakay and will definitely leave us thinking about it.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 10th Nov 2018 15:22

Bound to be pop'lar!
I leave this with a smile.

<Deleted User> (18980)

Sat 10th Nov 2018 07:15

I see what you did there Don.

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Don Matthews

Sat 10th Nov 2018 06:35

Taylor

I rebel at being conventional, doing the same old same old. Have done so all my life. How can we create new things if we don't push boundaries ? We can't

Don ?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 10th Nov 2018 06:21

Different take Don. Interesting how ideas form. ?

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