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Abused

 

 

The dog who came to dinner

had hopes on kindness pinned

alas his time was wasted

kicked to the side again

No bone or bread was tasted

no scraps were given him

the dog so aggravated

kicked to the side again

As chances for him faded

the future looking grim

he sulked under the table

kicked to the side again

There will be no celebrating

for poor old dogs like him

for kindness he's still waiting

kicked to the side again.

 

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Don Matthews

Mon 26th Nov 2018 00:39

For some reason I was thinking on a completely different plane here. I didn't even think it was an animal. I thought it was talking about a homeless underdog person

'for kindness he's still waiting

kicked to the side again'

Thankyou dk for opening up this pathway of thinking ?

<Deleted User> (18980)

Sun 25th Nov 2018 23:30

Well done Po.

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sun 25th Nov 2018 17:41

Sad poem.. mans best friend, a fitting poem demonstrating the thoughtless cruelty we inflict..?

Big Sal

Sun 25th Nov 2018 17:19

You're right on a legal front, Brian. "Slaughtered" is a more appropriate term anyways seeing as animals are slaughtered and no one gives a shit until they need a sandwich.

Seeing to that logic though, is it really appropriate to ever label a massacre of people as a 'slaughter' since the connotation is usually reserved for the killing of animals? Can't have it one way and not the other. Then we stand the risk of being a hypocrite with little logic.?

<Deleted User> (18980)

Sun 25th Nov 2018 17:12

Being pedantic, a murder charge only applies when a human is the victim.

Big Sal

Sun 25th Nov 2018 16:55

There are those animals that are abused, and then there are those that are murdered for no reason at all. Either way, great piece of yours.?

<Deleted User> (18980)

Sun 25th Nov 2018 15:31

Actually, dogs are happiest when they know their place in the pecking order. Provided your dog Knapey wasn't actually kicked but left to eat after everyone else had finished he would have been perfectly happy as long as this pattern was followed consistently.

Or perhaps you're not talking about dogs at all?

d.knape

Sun 25th Nov 2018 15:20

For all abused animals.

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