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First One Last

This weeks rhymers theme.. First

 

First One Last

 

First in line outside your gate.
Never one to be late.
I am no longer whole,
just one more tormented soul.

 

Head in hands on bended knees,
do you listen to my pleas?
This situation I have rehearsed,
I just need to be first.

 

I saw the smile behind your eyes,
to me it was a huge surprise.
I was waiting at the gate;
but this time I was too late.

 

The smile I caught was not for me.
I was not first in your queue;
the truth is; I was never the one for you.
That smile you smiled sailed right past,
I geuss I am just the first one last.

 

 

© 2018  Taylor Crowshaw

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Comments

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Hazel ettridge

Sun 2nd Dec 2018 21:28

Delightful Taylor.

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sun 2nd Dec 2018 16:26

Thank you John and Big Sal, just goes to show being first in the queue does not always guarantee the prize..?

Big Sal

Sun 2nd Dec 2018 12:52

I cut in any line - and this seems like the perfect opportunity to do just that.?

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John Coopey

Sun 2nd Dec 2018 08:47

I empathise, Taylor. I tell Our Gert I could have done better. Then I make my bed up in the shed.

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 1st Dec 2018 17:29

Thank you M.C. I enjoy your comments. I was always a cup half full type of girl..?

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 1st Dec 2018 15:38

Isn't optimism merely the coming to terms with pessimism?
The theme of hope against disappointment in the daily rituals of
life is well caught.

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 1st Dec 2018 15:31

Thank you for commenting Brian it is life and what is it they say..'What doesn't kill you makes you stronger."
Thank you everyone for the likes always very welcome and appreciated..?

<Deleted User> (18980)

Sat 1st Dec 2018 09:51

It's life isn't it Taylor...learning to bounce back from disappointment.

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