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The Huntress

The Huntress


The huntress stalks as she walks,
her instincts sharp and honed.
She no longer wants to be alone.


The huntress does not do menial work.
No stacking shelves,
or washing dishes for someone else.
She doesn't want to work nine to five just to exist and stay alive.


Instead of spending hours in front of a mirror 
she could be designing some haute couture.
Not for our huntress all that stress.
She doesn't do work or mess.


If you meet and fall in love that's ok, 
You will live to fight another day.
If you hunt him down to put in a cage,
I am afraid your mistake is grave.


The huntress is not only you,
there are others on the prowl who will catch him too.
Beware those smiles that beguile, 
for he will no longer be yours in a while.


Softly is the best approach 
genuine feelings do not need to be coached.
Love and desire which pierce the heart,
will seal a bond almost impossible to part.


Love is blind to wrinkles and age.
Together you turn each and every page.
Do not fear that the huntress may be near.
You can fell her in one, with your spear.

 

© 2018 Taylor Crowshaw
The Tracings of my Shadow

 

 

 

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Thu 6th Dec 2018 05:03

Congratulations Taylor...a very powerful piece!??

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Taylor Crowshaw

Wed 5th Dec 2018 21:53

Hi Lynn, I enjoyed reading your comments. As always I do appreciate your support and take on my poetry. Thank you..?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Wed 5th Dec 2018 21:51

Hugh thank you for commenting. Watch out for the sequel..?

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lynn hahn

Wed 5th Dec 2018 05:53

Interesting. Read your poem many times. I am getting different reactions. Unfortunately I have experienced the "huntress" that just wants to be taken care of. Twice been left for that type.

I have come to the wonderful place of acceptance. I have lost that desperate aching need for a mate. I hope it never returns.

I agree with M.C. The good old days of the forever mate seems to be unpopular. The world appears impatient. Taking the time to travel the mountains and valleys of relationships is something few are willing to do. Reboot and start over is the dance I see happening. I must admit that makes me sad.

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Hugh

Wed 5th Dec 2018 03:27

Strong and gripping ,you must write a follow on to this .The next episode is a must.The title must contain the Huntress.Brilliant.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 4th Dec 2018 15:49

An evergreen theme down the ages, with a popularity frequently
found in films for the widest audience. Cue: boo...hiss for the
femme fatale - or the cad and bounder! We like to think that "true
love" will prevail for the happy ending. Sadly, not always the case
in true life. Divorce lawyers smile a lot, I'm sure.

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Taylor Crowshaw

Tue 4th Dec 2018 15:04

Thanks Big Sal. I get deja vu quite often. It was included in my second book? Not on WoL prior to this.
So pleased you enjoyed it..?

Big Sal

Tue 4th Dec 2018 11:44

Second to last stanza sticks out like a sore thumb. ?

Well done on another one with film-like descriptions.

I don't know why, but I got deja vu while reading this piece. Regardless, it is always a treat.?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Tue 4th Dec 2018 11:03

Thank you Martin it is always encouraging to read your comments on my poetry. I appreciate them greatly..?
Jon, Hope is the one thing we cling to even in times of sadness. Although a spark of hope does sometimes bring feelings of guilt too..thank you for commenting your voice is always valued..?

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Jon Stainsby

Tue 4th Dec 2018 10:41

This brings up emotions of sadness and of hope in me. A lovely poem.

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Martin Elder

Tue 4th Dec 2018 10:39

I like this a lot Taylor. I think your poetry is going from strength to strength not only in format but in choice of subject which you really seem to get to grips with here. None of us like to be hunted and I am guessing that for some who are more vulnerable it can be a nightmare.

Nice one

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Taylor Crowshaw

Tue 4th Dec 2018 10:03

Hi David,
I really appreciate your comments. Human frailty, I too have been the hunter and hunted. Escape is possible.. Some relationships are just toxic, yet each of the participants with another partner can be perfectly normal and happy.
A lifetime of experiences has taught me that there is always hope. We are the masters of our own destiny..it is about choices.
Interesting take on the word spear...a subconscious message perhaps. ?

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