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Dieting

by

 

 

Thin and flat

where it was at

but now all that

is flab & fat

on dieting

not worth the flack

eat all you want

and just die fat.

 

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Don Matthews

Sun 2nd Dec 2018 22:43

I'm lean and thin
Diet not needed
Cos I'm an Aussie
Yep, pure Aussie breeded ?

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Hazel ettridge

Sun 2nd Dec 2018 21:02

I love my cat
Cos she is fat
If that's not true
I'll eat my hat.

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sun 2nd Dec 2018 20:53

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d.knape

Sun 2nd Dec 2018 18:08

weight will weigh you down
write lean
write fast
run off the words while you can.

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