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Coming Home from Evening Church

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I see it as a memory,

gleaming.

The stooks of corn

the patient folk

coming home from evening church.

There's something strange

as in a dream,

and over all

the moon hangs

like a golden sovereign

heavy with summer

and the deep rich night.

I want to join them

in their solid procession.

I want to follow them

to their humble homesteads.

To a life of planting and sowing

and finding peace

in a good harvest.

To dwell between

those hills like breasts

hummocked against a velvet sky

and crowned with the summer tri-angle.

 

Inspired by the painting - Coming Home from Evening Church by Samuel Palmer

 

 

 

 

 

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Rachel McGladdery

Thu 28th Jan 2010 22:20

This is beautiful Ann, I loved the moon hanging like a golden sovereign heavy with summer and the last four lines too, this is stunning.
rachel
xxx

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Graham Sherwood

Thu 28th Jan 2010 20:46

The moon hangs like a golden sovereign, heavy with summer and the deep rich night. Phew! Did it for me. A warm piece of work Ann.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 28th Jan 2010 12:21

Your poem is inspired, full of mood, entirely apart from the visual painting. I find it so hard to see only the romance; but you have captured a moment of beauty to be enjoyed of itself. 'I want ...' certainly expresses desire, perhaps to be 'a religious person'? I think you are very spiritual, responding to the best ideals of 'religion' evoked by this painting.

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Wed 27th Jan 2010 23:41

Good evening Ann-a lovely homely poem,accompanied by a lovely painting indeed! thank you.Stefx

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Dave Bradley

Wed 27th Jan 2010 17:40

Lovely!!!

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Ann Foxglove

Wed 27th Jan 2010 17:10

I'm not a religious person, but this has always been my favourite painting. The poem is a very simple one, hopefuly echoing the simplicity of the painting.

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